Knoxius's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Desolation]

Not exactly anything I'd listen to, but I think a lot of effort was put into this. Pretty repetitive, but definitely headed in a good direction. Keep up the good work and don't stop putting your all into it.

JacksonTime responds:

Thanks man, this isn't my best song because I recorded it like a year ago. I feel like I'm a much more seasoned songwriter now.

[Simplistic Mudokons]

Too chaotic. I can see how everything would fit together, but the synth did not stay consistent volume-wise, and the drums seemed poorly crafted as an arrangement. As well, the samples did not fit in very well (I'd recommend using some FX or automation to keep their entry and exit smooth and a bit more in the background. Keep at it, you're on to something.

monk1 responds:

Honestly, it wasn't meant to be that serious at all, but I do really appreciate your comments and appreciation for what's there.
I'll look into what you said my newer stuff I do. :)

[Leaving Our Galaxy]

Around 00:24 the strings are arranged nicely, yet the tremolo slapped me right in the wrong spot of my taste and it seemed too loud...however I only thought that for a second. Really like the way the strings move in an out; it sets up a mystical scene, a feeling of unknowing yet moving forward, and simply for that ability to do so, I applaud you and this song.

LawnReality responds:

I'm really glad you enjoyed the track, thank you!

[Caritas - Will It Blend?]

That synth in the beginning was a bit piercing, but that bass definitely made it worth the listen, as well as the kickass line at 1:53. The wobbly feel of that lead synth could be done without.

Overall this track kicks hard enough for me to love it.

VernCarson responds:

It WAS a bit much, wasn't it? I couldn't figure out if it was or not, and ended up leaving it go. Thank you for confirming my suspicions.

[War on Technology Part 1]

Must not be my cup of tea. I kept expecting the song to progress, but that beat just seemed to drag out my anticipation into an ultimately disappointing end.

deadbea7 responds:

repetitive? yes. your anticipation? i don't know, i'm not sure if you're impatient or pretty chill. i was hoping for reviews that would actually be beneficial to the progress of this music. this just seems like a very opinionated review and in no way presents any kind of idea on how to improve. i suppose i could base the rest of the song to off of your opinionated taste and see where that goes, but then again my opinionated displeasure of your review would probably give me the case of the fuck its. i don't mean to be a dick, but come on, at least recommend something i could do to improve. maybe i could double up one of the kicks or maybe add in some extra percussion somewhere or maybe even a crazy high pitch synth that just blasts through the chorus or whatever. i wish to see reviews on how to improve, not biased judgement based on your taste of music. i do appreciate you taking the time to make an attempt to review this piece. you're more than welcome to pm me with recommendations on how to improve based on your style of music rather than your taste. i'm sure i can learn something from you other than your opinion.

[Magazines]

The vocal track is flawless, but the backing beat is a bit empty. Definitely material I would expect on the radio, though, so good job.

headphoamz responds:

Thanks so much Knoxius :D

[Social]

Well mixed and written. The guitar is a little more metal than my taste, but it fits.

Unless perceived as satirical, the lyrics seem to bland and a bit ironic (all the stuff about bitching). Maybe work on your lyrics a bit more... :)

Overall, not really a song I'd listen to and the lyrics sucked, but it's production was nevertheless in good hands.

[This is The End]

I like what you have, but it's incredibly clippy.

fix that! and then make moar

L13S responds:

Thanks, do you have any suggestions to fix that? Message me if you do :)

[Facing the danger!]

Had my head bobbing for the whole intro. As said below, the drums were a bit weak and definitely over saturated with reverb. There are spots here and there of dissonance (the bad kind), but overall the track sounds awesome. Really driving, and you definitely wrote some parts that greatly appeal to me.

Good song, just work on that mixing a bit.

CeeeX responds:

Mixing is definitely my archilles heel.

I often have a hard time to get the best of a certain sound.

Thanks for the feedback!

[Left & Lost Forever Pt.2]

I thought that square synth was a little obnoxious, and the drums are super cheesy (and quiet). But hey, I'm just talking synths here; the composition is cool as hell. I could see this as background music to a sidescroller or strategy game.

Keep at it, you're doing a good job!